12.09.2007

rough draft reel


this is a rough draft of a reel I'm putting together for graduate school. I've never tried to condense all of my work, so comments/suggestions are appreciated.

8 comments:

ingrid said...

This is really lovely.

Rock Scout said...

explosions yes,
cobwebs no

may I suggest using two pieces of music. Two is better than one right?

I'm impressed.

nicole said...

so, he pieces are really lovely. i think theres an even amount of rearesentation of animation and non shown, though maybe more animation should be shown? i agree, maybe more music, the single song, though well linked to the transitions in the imagery does read like a discovery channel important issue infomercial. which isnt entirely bad, but i think eith something more lively, or a combination of more than one song would be nice.

(i know i dont know you, i'm that one weird friend of peters from detroit, i do like to watch your viedos from time to time, and i also like friendly crits. on things.) hope its helpful, and its a really beautiful rough reel...

Anonymous said...

it's amazing

-Margaret

Amanda said...

Hi B. Magna Wander here. I tried to see your other films in completion, but could only get a full version of For the Three, which I thought was well done, tender, and interestingly told. This shows a lot of your use of different visual media: animation, live, mixtures, layering, etc. What it doesn't show (and it may just be that this is draft 1), is that you can use different sound media. Another piece of music is a good suggestion. You might also consider adding some dialogue, or different distorted voices or atonal music or something. Best of luck to you for grad school! xoxo

Amanda said...

oh yeah - sound effects...? other sounds?

Amanda said...

ok. last comment, I just wanted to say how beautiful some of the images were. There was some grass in black & white - possibly negative & layered? and the fish - tears stuff I thought was really cool. And that image of your dad running. well, I could gush all night...

Anonymous said...

^^

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